This week, I have finished my narrative piece of writing. The title is called 'One last chance'
My story is about a girl and her mum. They have a car crash. The girl Lola gets her arm amputated. She loves dancing. But she still had a chance. Just one last chance.
I felt good about my narrative writing because A strategy that I used in my writing was: When a new character is speaking I make a new line, I use good punctuation, and I use good language features such as: James said timidly, or Zoe squealed as she gave her Dad a loving smile.
One thing I could remember next time in my narrative writing is: To order my different ideas into separate paragraphs.
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